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Post by twilight on Jun 22, 2008 16:12:11 GMT -5
Name: Harlee Culten
Nick Name: Harlen
Age: 16
Hair color/length/style: Black/inch past shoulder/straight/emo-ish
Eye color: red
Skin: tan
Height: 5'5'
Weight: 100lbs
Species: Vampire
Special Power (only if vampire, sometimes other depending on what the admins say): Premonition, Mind Control, Can change form
Fur Color (only if a werewolf): Sorry, im not a dog.
Body Build: Strong, but doesn't like to show muscles
Tattoo/Piercing: Snake bite piercings, Nose, Ears (top and bottom) Belly button, Eye brow, Tattoo of star on right foot, Chinese symbol of Vampire on left ankle
Jewelry: Gold ring on middle finger (right hand)
Picture (optional): N/A
Anything Extra: Extremely beautiful. Desired. Partially good, Partially evil. Can control herself around blood.
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Post by Jazzi on Jun 22, 2008 16:18:18 GMT -5
There are a few things wrong that need to me changed.
1) Your last name is too close to Cullen, it need to be atleast 3 letters different.
2) You need to state if your vampire is a vegitarian or not
3) You can only have one power
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Post by twilight on Jun 22, 2008 16:22:26 GMT -5
Name: Harlee Kalten
Nick Name: Harlen
Age: 16
Hair color/length/style: Black/inch past shoulder/straight/emo-ish
Eye color: red
Skin: tan
Height: 5'5'
Weight: 100lbs
Species: Vampire
Special Power (only if vampire, sometimes other depending on what the admins say): Can change form (into animals, other people ect.)
Fur Color (only if a werewolf): Sorry, im not a dog.
Body Build: Strong, but doesn't like to show muscles
Tattoo/Piercing: Snake bite piercings, Nose, Ears (top and bottom) Belly button, Eye brow, Tattoo of star on right foot, Chinese symbol of Vampire on left ankle
Jewelry: Gold ring on middle finger (right hand)
Picture (optional): N/A
Anything Extra: Extremely beautiful. Desired. Partially good, Partially evil. Can control herself around blood. But, i do eat people. I am not a Vegetarian.
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Post by Jazzi on Jun 22, 2008 16:28:16 GMT -5
Again, one small problem. If you are going to have the power to change form you can only change into an animal and you can only change into one animal, and it cannot be a wolf.
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Post by twilight on Jun 22, 2008 16:34:47 GMT -5
Name: Harlee Kalten
Nick Name: Harlen
Age: 100
Appears As: 16
Hair color/length/style: Black/inch past shoulder/straight/emo-ish
Eye color: red
Skin: tan
Height: 5'5'
Weight: 100lbs
Species: Vampire
Special Power (only if vampire, sometimes other depending on what the admins say): Mind Control
Fur Color (only if a werewolf): Sorry, im not a dog.
Body Build: Strong, but doesn't like to show muscles
Tattoo/Piercing: Snake bite piercings, Nose, Ears (top and bottom) Belly button, Eye brow, Tattoo of star on right foot, Chinese symbol of Vampire on left ankle
Jewelry: Gold ring on middle finger (right hand)
Picture (optional): N/A
Anything Extra: Extremely beautiful. Desired. Partially good, Partially evil. Can control herself around blood. But, i do eat people. I am not a Vegetarian.
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Post by Jazzi on Jun 22, 2008 16:51:10 GMT -5
Your character is here by aprooved! Have fun on the site and make sure not to kill to many people!
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